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Project 2 feedback and changes …

I recieved a great response and some good feedback in the Universities peer critique for project 2. Based on the feedback and some suggestion, I’ve made a few changes to my project.
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I have recropped the shot above and blurred the background so it is less distracting behind the phone users.
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I tried another crop above which included another photographer but I thought it aslo distracted from the boys who were so interesting.

As a note on it’s development, the image above is actually one that I combined from two photos – the unused portions from both are shown below, you can make out where it is split behind the boy at left which shows how close I came to not capturing this image.
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After much consideration, I’ve chosen the image below to replace image 7 of the smiling couple at the table.
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I dismissed this image originally as it is a tad blurry, but I’ve sharpened the ladies face and phone and I think it is more fitting to the caption as part of the story.

Some other options I considered are shown below:


I think the image below is probably the most powerful in the series.
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I’ve blurred the background to put more focus onto the subject so that it has more of an impact. I did this in Photoshop by selecting the background only then using the blur tool so that it appeared natural as if I’d used a larger aperture when taken. I also used the burn tool the darken the girls midtones and highlights slightly and the sponge tool the add a little saturation to her so she stands out a little more.

Of the last image in my series, the tutor Jess said this:
“The last image of the piled up broken phones is effective but doesn’t work as well with the series. I would reconsider this one or include another that is similar.”
After thinking about Jess’ comments, I had an idea last night to alter the last image so that it included a human element and a reference to social media platforms in the hope that it ties in better with the other images in my series while relating to the story of social media consumption.
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As I couldn’t access the old broken phones again, I took a seperate photo and used photoshop to combine them.

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